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Old 02-27-2016, 07:24 PM   #4
UnbornBuddha
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I enjoyed this, albeit the ending for me felt too feeble in comparison to some of other lines. I really enjoyed this line "the prince's sainted stroll, ignited by a momentous lucidity" very impactful wording. Anyhow, this is my first time seeing your work and it's obvious you have skill. I hope to see some more of your work, especially in the AOWL.
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