Netcees - View Single Post - Lotto Smirk vs Hush

Pinot Grij · 02-26-2016, 01:09 PM

Hush

Kettle line is good.
Sofa bed doesn't do anything for me.
Countries, not counties - spelling mistake takes away from a decent punch. I think someone else had a Risk line last week tho.
Rooted is good.
Choking line is dope af.
Recycling is dope.
Gasoline is dope.
I don't get the closer.

Nice hits - different attacks throughout.

Lotto

Hush flips is dope.
I come to expect a discussion forum bar from you every week - maybe switch it up - its getting predictable.
Islam line is good but can be worded a little more straightforward
That's the 4th Call of Duty line in the league so far, so its getting a little old.
Royale line is decent - "spotty teen and nerdy thing" is a bit weird tho.
Closer ok.

Vote -- Hush. Lotto was a rush job. Hush had a few solid haymakers. I liked the choke line the best.

02-26-2016, 01:09 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Hush Kettle line is good. Sofa bed doesn't do anything for me. Countries, not counties - spelling mistake takes away from a decent punch. I think someone else had a Risk line last week tho. Rooted is good. Choking line is dope af. Recycling is dope. Gasoline is dope. I don't get the closer. Nice hits - different attacks throughout. Lotto Hush flips is dope. I come to expect a discussion forum bar from you every week - maybe switch it up - its getting predictable. Islam line is good but can be worded a little more straightforward That's the 4th Call of Duty line in the league so far, so its getting a little old. Royale line is decent - "spotty teen and nerdy thing" is a bit weird tho. Closer ok. Vote -- Hush. Lotto was a rush job. Hush had a few solid haymakers. I liked the choke line the best. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.