[ZeeDee]

Dead man, this was good from start to finish to show the character outgrowing his home surroundings and making his way into different societies. Realistic and payed nicely with the piture. The narration was superb as well. Almost every stanza of flow was smooth to read and made this enjoyable to go through. Some unique word choices for rhymes that was impressive as well. The character build of this piece was nice as well as you can fel it happening and side with the character as he leaves.

Frank... honestly... didn't think you were going to have enough to beat this, but you surprised me a great deal with this one. The imagery was on a spectacular level.. so even though the story of dopefiend is kinda eeehhh... you made is like a documentary of a dopefiend with all the great and graphic details.... that's just the imagery.... the flow was fire even with the stretched lines and the continual rhyme is something very few can carry out and still keep it fresh within the content as well as not reuse the same words when continuing the same rhyme pattern. Toic wise, it fits the picture.. you took the time to paint the character very well and I was feeling that. I know how difficult it is to carry a deep flow for a long sequence and still build the story and develop everything right.. you did these elements very well and I'm impressed...

This was defintely a great battle... this has my vote for botw.. great job fellas... both of you impressed me, but one was more impressive in the format... both have great narration and descriptive details... but

Vote frank.. just impressed a little more..