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Originally Posted by Buddha
Its reopened he dropped feed on Split's piece. It wasn't good feed but it's a start and that's all I can ask at this point.
To feed this piece, there were some good lines mixed with bad lines. An example of a good line:
im fly as fuck try ya luck ill have ya bitch in my caddy
Bad line:
recline the seat my dick deep n I aint wanna meet ur daddy,
Try to sit down and think of what you're going to write before you write it. Don't just drop the same old shit you know what I mean? If this is the style that you like then try to think of a creative way to say it instead of just saying it. That's my feed man. Stay active.
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dude ur not getting my punchlines... "all i gotta do is call or add ho like the avelanche" was an amzing punchline... dont just skim thru my bars bro actualy study them i have crazy punchlines i guarentee thats y sharp got me to come to this site "have u leanin back with 2 straps to ur chest like a heavy backpack" is another dope punch. im not tryin to act cocky but bro those punchlines r nice. and "recline the SEAT my dick DEEP i dont wanna meat ur daddy" is a rhyme inside a rhyme!! like???? read it over bro ur missin key bars.