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Old 02-19-2016, 02:04 PM   #13
Pinot Grij
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Witty, shame on you for having the opportunity to leave a crater in this man's existence and almost getting out-barred.

That bedroom line sealed it for you, but def a missed opportunity.

10 Senses. I like your gumption, but your wordplay is about 25 years old and that's not an exaggeration. Some of that shit had me laughing for real, but at you not with you. Try to take a look at how others are wording their shit and the kinda of concepts that get love from the voters and it can help you along the way. Not saying be derivative but there's a certain way of doing things that'll get reaction from voters.

Vote -- Witty
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