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Old 05-09-2013, 12:56 PM   #9
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Fuckin poetic shit right here lol. I can't say I understand all of what this is about since it is a kinda abstract piece, what I will say is that this is very beautifully written and allot of time has been put into this piece. Very nicely done really.

you're more to me than the court dates.
corny theatrics.
forty-something, pity pageant,
grinning bastard courting asses
tits and city subway passes
^^Others have cited this too but this is my favorite passage here. Nice.

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