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Pinot Grij · 02-17-2016, 04:32 PM

Unfuk
Holes is a bit dated but the punch connected. Good wording.
I don't get the .WAV reference.
"moment, ummm" - the wordplay there isn't that killer.
Eggs Benny had the makings of some cool wordplay, but I don't think it came together that harsh.
Strange fruit - again, cool concept, but the execution was just ok.
Vest and vessel was tough to read. Didn't pick up on it til later.
Leisure is cool.

Unfuk - a bit plagued by tough wording, but I like the creativity. Just needs to be pulled together a bit tighter.

Strange
2006 line is cool
50/50 is dope.
un fucked is LOTB. Nice nameplay.
Drone strike is cool imagery.
Penelope Cruz line is funny af.
Paramedic / Jesus is ok.
Carl Grimes is cool, but definitely a niche reference.
Closer was eh.

I gotta go with Strange. I felt like he connected on more concepts. Rewind porno tapes was hilarious. Overall, very entertaining. Like I said before, Unfuk just suffered a bit too much from undeveloped concepts. Cool battle tho.

Vote - Strange

02-17-2016, 04:32 PM	#8
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Unfuk Holes is a bit dated but the punch connected. Good wording. I don't get the .WAV reference. "moment, ummm" - the wordplay there isn't that killer. Eggs Benny had the makings of some cool wordplay, but I don't think it came together that harsh. Strange fruit - again, cool concept, but the execution was just ok. Vest and vessel was tough to read. Didn't pick up on it til later. Leisure is cool. Unfuk - a bit plagued by tough wording, but I like the creativity. Just needs to be pulled together a bit tighter. Strange 2006 line is cool 50/50 is dope. un fucked is LOTB. Nice nameplay. Drone strike is cool imagery. Penelope Cruz line is funny af. Paramedic / Jesus is ok. Carl Grimes is cool, but definitely a niche reference. Closer was eh. I gotta go with Strange. I felt like he connected on more concepts. Rewind porno tapes was hilarious. Overall, very entertaining. Like I said before, Unfuk just suffered a bit too much from undeveloped concepts. Cool battle tho. Vote - Strange __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M. Last edited by Pinot Grij; 02-17-2016 at 04:43 PM.