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Old 02-17-2016, 02:31 PM   #11
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u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake


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no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.

got an extra quoted line and overall a better worded more consistent verse for Infiltration. Lotto had some good ideas but lacked a little on execution imo.

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