No1 rates u as hard, never wrote a bar that's bad or mean
We all thinking inflame so I'll torch this loser to his death w/ gasoline
u wanna talk gun bars, well Its nothing for me to let the weapon spray
Ill put a couple up top that'll make sure u won't make it to see ya wedding cake
--- inf lame is cool, pronunciation is a lil off but I like it. Wedding cake was nice imo, I don't care for gun bars but I like this one.
I'll go slow, when I slice u w/ the blade for them poor dim bars
won't make the horroh short, but ur body'll be looking like it could feature in lar's
--- I haven't read the cypher so this is aite to me, wording is a lil off tho. Holding a piece steady line was aite too but it came off a lil corny. Overall tho this is one of the better verses I've seen from u. Props.
Vs.
no punches landed on grij at best u left some soft impressions.
we frowned on that verse... smirk lines were all filler like Botox injections.
--- I like the name play and simile........
a walkin disgrace. swear u'll drop fire but only the ball in its place.
think ya shit dont stink.. funny its when u try covering it up w/ Lysol in my face.
--- wp ok, didn't like the wording tho...........
this is like a new twist on the bible story of sodom in genesis, ya'll.
i'll walk away w/ Lot's Wife. & we'll look back to see HIM turn to a pillar of salt.
--- again I like the concept, just don't like the flip.....cuz in the story Lot's wife turned to a pillar of salt because she looked back....might be nitpicking but it doesn't work for me...........
u cant trust any1 anymore. friends faces can seem alien my dude.
Sci-Fi masked up at ya front door...a 5th Wave & ya world gets taken from you.
--- aite for a gun bar..........
u came into the battle wild w/ ire. but skillwise i'm miles up higher.
inferno respect smokin your wack ass but i still completed this easy trial by fire.
--- I used this against bash in the BAL, and saying 'easy trial by fire' sounds weird.............idk I feel like u switched ur style up or something and I'm not really feelin it. This isn't up to par with ur usual stuff.
V. Lotto
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