Netcees - View Single Post - Championship Match: ill nik-A vs Infiltration - (ill nik-A wins)

Pinot Grij · 02-11-2016, 04:40 PM

Inf
Dead dad jokes are a little harsh for my tastes.
I like the "okayish quotes" as a setup rhyme, but the "robbery" angle for a punch is well-worn
Over the Top punch is pretty dated, but I like the rhyme scheme throughout
Spare tire line is fire.
Footlongs - setup was hilarious. Punch was good.
A to B is weirdly worded, sounds like you're sayin' the opposite of what you're tryna say.
English is a good concept, but a weird image - do chicks really be spinnin' balls around in their mouths??
Closer is good.

ill nik-A
Opener fire.
Roulette bar is ruthless in its execution, wordplay is just aight.
Resume line - again, ruthless aggressiveness is the trademark here. This hits hard.
Ionno who blac chyna is.
I like dealer certified, but "hurts your pride" is a soft setup.
I don't get the RB line.
Concepts line is decent.
Asian line is played.

nik-A had all the aggressiveness in the world for this matchup and that's why I'm siding with him. It's like he hit the next level in a champ match, which is why it's good to have experience in your corner. Inf was alright, but not on a championship level in this one.

Vote -- ill nik-A

02-11-2016, 04:40 PM	#12
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Inf Dead dad jokes are a little harsh for my tastes. I like the "okayish quotes" as a setup rhyme, but the "robbery" angle for a punch is well-worn Over the Top punch is pretty dated, but I like the rhyme scheme throughout Spare tire line is fire. Footlongs - setup was hilarious. Punch was good. A to B is weirdly worded, sounds like you're sayin' the opposite of what you're tryna say. English is a good concept, but a weird image - do chicks really be spinnin' balls around in their mouths?? Closer is good. ill nik-A Opener fire. Roulette bar is ruthless in its execution, wordplay is just aight. Resume line - again, ruthless aggressiveness is the trademark here. This hits hard. Ionno who blac chyna is. I like dealer certified, but "hurts your pride" is a soft setup. I don't get the RB line. Concepts line is decent. Asian line is played. nik-A had all the aggressiveness in the world for this matchup and that's why I'm siding with him. It's like he hit the next level in a champ match, which is why it's good to have experience in your corner. Inf was alright, but not on a championship level in this one. Vote -- ill nik-A __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.