When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
These were aite, ebonics words is nice, Mario villains feels like a throw back/dated concept. Whales back was really bad tho, from a technical standpoint it was aite but that's it lol. The rest of ur verse was meh, felt rushed. All strait forward similes with no real thought put into it. Flips were bland too.
Vs
You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
--- aite but feels dated
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
--- all these were slightly above average. Didn't get the zika virus reference and can't be arsed to Google.
Overall: both verses felt rushed with first draft lines getting posted. That's cool, OK read but nothing too crazy. Pretty close too but I felt like tic put a lil more effort into his shit
V. Tic
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