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Pinot Grij · 02-10-2016, 03:28 PM

Hush

When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd
U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words
setup is kinda wordy - i like the premise of the punch, but it was not killer
from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing
No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian
decent line
One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack
One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back
I like the setup as a punch better than the punch, lol - both nice tho
I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me
Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery
I don't get the reference
Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy
U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie
Selfie feels like a dry concept, but you flipped it nice
Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for
All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars
this is aight
If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold
This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole
old ass reference - I don't remember Gauntlet that well tho. sorry

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Tic

You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it
You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice"
eeeee.. that's a little played
No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent
Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus
I like this. Pretty hilarious
Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers
All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners
Nice imagery - still topical concept too
Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest
Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect
I don't get this one.
Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best
We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X
I don't get this one either
I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate
The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section
This is alright
Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream
Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene
The concept is a little lost here

I really like how Tic started off - The Zika and the Oscars lines were bomb as fuck, but everything esle after that kida fell off. I think if you could've kept up that firing rate, you coulda taken it but as it stands I gotta go with Hush. I think some of the punches weren't that hard-hitting, but I like the variance of concepts. There was something there for everyone.

Vote -- Hush

02-10-2016, 03:28 PM	#5
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Hush When it come to hands I'd merk this weak, frail cartoon comic nerd U pose no threat ya body got no real definition like Ebonics words setup is kinda wordy - i like the premise of the punch, but it was not killer from the jump U been gettin kicked around by nebody that's willing No game, You've had ya head stomped in more than any super Mario villian decent line One punch leave ya shit hanging half off, that's a sales rack One shot behind ya head and fluid spraying out like a whales back I like the setup as a punch better than the punch, lol - both nice tho I'm a certified legend . Killing this shit has never been hard to me Yea u got off vs resin. Their wasn't enuff evidence to convict u of the robbery I don't get the reference Don't bother trying gun bars. For nerds like u it's unhealthy U got anything to flash and I'll make u aim it at ur own face like a selfie Selfie feels like a dry concept, but you flipped it nice Vs me u lighting the c4, U the type of Coward asking why it's beef for All my niggas turn to animals An shoot This is transformers beast wars this is aight If I'm in fight mode..Mr Freeze when I grip the beam..ice cold This is Gaultnet for Nes all I gotta do is press a button and your life's stole old ass reference - I don't remember Gauntlet that well tho. sorry vs Tic You'''''''re trash. No one will read ^that verse & quote it You have no Drive left. Even ya text resume reads "License suspended until further notice" eeeee.. that's a little played No bitch wants you near, ya bum ass diseased & violent Your touch threatens baby mama's everywhere...you're basically the Zika virus I like this. Pretty hilarious Stop it wigger. Act hard but you don't pack glocks or triggers All I did was mention a scope & he turned whiter than the Oscar winners Nice imagery - still topical concept too Precision attack has this cry baby's heart broke in ya chest Blade leave ya insides lifeless - I call it the blighted ovum effect I don't get this one. Things change, you're hopeless now even at ya best We used to believe in you, Hush. Now you're the text version of Planet X I don't get this one either I'm the Iceman. Stuff ya body in a freezer, head is separate The knife'll have ya body w/ more cold cuts than the fuckin deli section This is alright Wifey says you don't hit. When I was humpin, shoulda heard her scream Every Newcomer body went into shock like weak stomachs at a murder scene The concept is a little lost here I really like how Tic started off - The Zika and the Oscars lines were bomb as fuck, but everything esle after that kida fell off. I think if you could've kept up that firing rate, you coulda taken it but as it stands I gotta go with Hush. I think some of the punches weren't that hard-hitting, but I like the variance of concepts. There was something there for everyone. Vote -- Hush __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.