If ya bitch got syphilis, I wouldn't be suprised with ya slippery Tramp,
she got u feeling the Burn, now u a potential threat to hillary's camp.
^ Ok. Coulda worded this better imo.
Like said:" feeling the burn.. u could win every poll in Dem states" or something, as it us its kind've okay take on a popular slogan.
I'll make ur second place go viral, ya punch drunk lame,
I'd say burd's been dropping turds ...way before the trump dump game
^ Nah wack imo.
droppin turds is lame thing to say, & referencing trump after Bernie is kindve redundant..
Allen gave u the dick to rescue this league, u thought u on some braveheart shit.
while knight giving you the whole load ..rivals any laundromat graveyard shift.
^Nah. Load is played in this context.. and laundromat flip isn't hard hitting, imo..
quit ya hiding. These back to back bars will destroy ur frail asshole.
I'd have the mexican officials suspicious when they see this L, chop O
^ Sloppy executing, kindve stretched, but ehh better idea w/ nameplay I guess
we'll go tow to tow. fuck ya drive and hardest writtens
claim that spot for a little too long and get taken out like excessive' parking tickets
^ Cool closer, your best line, best worded 1 too, do more if this and you'll fare better in the league.. Could've setup to make it harder too, like " Orc sits on the throne but cant go tow to tow w/ my hardest writtens"
Overall, seemed rushed, but last line has potential..
Orc won tho.. Smoother, more direct with disses..
Spotlight and show of hands took it
Vote orc
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