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e11even · 02-04-2016, 12:46 PM

I think this was a cool passing thought in that it seems to accomplish a vent due to relationship problems. I'm sure everyone can relate and if you expanded on it in your classic style, it would be volumes better. This was ok for what it was. I didn't really like the nursery rhyme setup, but like i said, it accomplished what it seems like you were trying to do. Good job for the most part.

I have "purpose." in the OM if you care to RTF. thanks regardless :)

02-04-2016, 12:46 PM	#8
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	I think this was a cool passing thought in that it seems to accomplish a vent due to relationship problems. I'm sure everyone can relate and if you expanded on it in your classic style, it would be volumes better. This was ok for what it was. I didn't really like the nursery rhyme setup, but like i said, it accomplished what it seems like you were trying to do. Good job for the most part. I have "purpose." in the OM if you care to RTF. thanks regardless :) __________________ Ahem.