I enjoyed this quite a bit too, the ending was perfect and put a nice closure to it all.
Think I enjoyed this section the most when it comes to flow and so forth:
porch rockers, storm watchers, I'm refilling the flask.
we'll watch tail-ends of tempests keep tilling the grass-
lightning kissing Marblehead turning silica glass.
^ Really well crafted and great choice of words.
Dope shit as usual Dr Dog.
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