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Pinot Grij · 01-31-2016, 01:06 PM

Inf.

Opener had a lot going on - I appreciate the commitment to the concept, but it felt like there was too much for it to land solidly
Hidden charges is dope af.
Dental Kit is a bit of a stretch
Grind, Pops is cool wordplay-wise, just not sure how much it hurts as a diss
Bags line is better
Shroud of Turin is good.

Des.
Opener was clean, could've been worded a little better, but still nice.
Inf flip is good.
I don't get the Chyeah reference.
Smash Bro line is dope.
Yeezy line had dope rhyming - punchline was ok, but execution elevated it.
I like the wordplay in the closer.

Ok, so Hidden Charges is the LOTB for me. Inf also had a very impressive opener although I think you overthought it and maybe lacked some oomph because of it. Des was a little more subtle and straightforward which was good, but no real knock-out blows. Plus that Chyeah line - I'm not hip with.

Think I gotta go with Inf on this one but I was definitely feeling some of Des's lines.

01-31-2016, 01:06 PM	#8
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Inf. Opener had a lot going on - I appreciate the commitment to the concept, but it felt like there was too much for it to land solidly Hidden charges is dope af. Dental Kit is a bit of a stretch Grind, Pops is cool wordplay-wise, just not sure how much it hurts as a diss Bags line is better Shroud of Turin is good. Des. Opener was clean, could've been worded a little better, but still nice. Inf flip is good. I don't get the Chyeah reference. Smash Bro line is dope. Yeezy line had dope rhyming - punchline was ok, but execution elevated it. I like the wordplay in the closer. Ok, so Hidden Charges is the LOTB for me. Inf also had a very impressive opener although I think you overthought it and maybe lacked some oomph because of it. Des was a little more subtle and straightforward which was good, but no real knock-out blows. Plus that Chyeah line - I'm not hip with. Think I gotta go with Inf on this one but I was definitely feeling some of Des's lines. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.