Netcees - View Single Post - Unfukwitable 1-0 Vs Utmost 1-0

Pinot Grij · 01-23-2016, 02:15 PM

Utmost
Opener was cool concept - but could've been flipped more effectively
Balloon animals - again a cool concept that was witty but wasn't killer
Beer Koozy line was cool - enhanced by nice multis
Don't know about that subway reference
More power line is played
Jonas line was ehh

Looks like you were straining your concepts a bit. But I appreciate where your head's at - looking forward to reading more as the league goes on.

Unfuk
I don't really get the opener
Crosshairs concepts pretty played out at this stage
Katt Williams line is a stretch
Idle line was ehh
Closer was fire though - lmao.

Ok - Unfukwitable's closer was the LOTB easily. Shit had me laughing. But that crosshairs shit I definitely saw in a battle in 1999, so I gotta deduct points for that.

Utmost had more creative concepts - even though I think both battlers here are capable of coming harder.

Vote -- Utmost

01-23-2016, 02:15 PM	#9
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Utmost Opener was cool concept - but could've been flipped more effectively Balloon animals - again a cool concept that was witty but wasn't killer Beer Koozy line was cool - enhanced by nice multis Don't know about that subway reference More power line is played Jonas line was ehh Looks like you were straining your concepts a bit. But I appreciate where your head's at - looking forward to reading more as the league goes on. Unfuk I don't really get the opener Crosshairs concepts pretty played out at this stage Katt Williams line is a stretch Idle line was ehh Closer was fire though - lmao. Ok - Unfukwitable's closer was the LOTB easily. Shit had me laughing. But that crosshairs shit I definitely saw in a battle in 1999, so I gotta deduct points for that. Utmost had more creative concepts - even though I think both battlers here are capable of coming harder. Vote -- Utmost __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.