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Old 01-22-2016, 08:10 PM   #9
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It's been a while since I read a battle where both people told stories.

I'm going to keep this one plain & simply. I enjoyed VV's verse more. I thought you had a great opener, and the rest was good. Glad you mentioned you were a girl, I thought you were madd homo for a while. Anyways, enjoyable read.

This miiighttt be the first verse I read from Frank. I usually stay away from these long verse battles... I just, it's rare someone keeps me interested for their whole verse. And, I was kind of bored by Frank's verse. I had to force myself to finish it. I felt like some of it was repetitive, although I enjoyed the "long bar" style. I actually enjoyed your rhyme scheme for the most part, just wasn't a big fan of the story. Anyways, the vote is going for the guy that kept me more entertained.

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