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Old 01-22-2016, 07:54 PM   #11
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They were our David, our Mona Lisa, our Sistine chapel
Sculpted by the hands of Gods with a pristine scalpel

Dope.

To be honest, I thought you had a real, real solid verse. Flow was smooth, I liked your take on the topic, everything was good. But, Cimm's verse just appealed to me more.

Might be the first verse from Cimm I read, but I thought it was dope. The rapid fire rhyming, the schemes, the wording, the whole take on a stock broker/market crash.. It was a really dope verse bruh. Kudos.

Sucks because I feel like Witty had a good verse, just Cimm's was so much more enjoyable to me.

Thanks for the read guys.

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