vV -- where do u live that summer is 10 months?? Just thought that was a funny continuity error. Decent story. Nothing stood out to me in the linear story. Some awkward wording but nothing that deterred enjoyability. Some bits of the story that seemed disjointed from others. It was night/u coukd have him for lunch. Certain capitalized words that lead me to believe something is being personified but it not being clear enough. Idk. Decent
Frank -- im pretty confident that pink floyd had no part in tge summer of love as they were an 80s (70s?) band mostly. So that hommage bugged me. Staple style where you bog down story potential to use an unkept rhyme scheme. The twist was unenjoyable and poorly presented. Pretty surprise you slept on VV, i guess you just werent good enough this time around.
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Originally Posted by RichardCorey
I can't beat this Pent. I'll admit, on my best day, I couldn't beat this Pent.
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Last edited by Pent uP; 01-22-2016 at 04:07 PM.
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