GC, I actually like you bringing the colorful subject of narco.. I can't spell it, but the concept you used was a great idea. Your start was good and seemed like it would open up more, but it kind of continued and really didn't open up to me. Like the different feeling of being awake to being out in a flash. In the end, the flow was hard to follow and the content seemed lack luster. Great idea, needed more content.
Pent, it was cool how you took a very simple task of driving through traffic, maybe to work, into a colorful collage of actions. You're flow and depth into the subject made this even more enjoyable to read. Depressing expressions, but that's probably the viewpoint of most of the country on their way to work.
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