yo VV got way more bacon crispy with ur wording bro props. I enjoyed this and thought it had a nice conclusion to match the gravity of the subject proposed. Thought the story was contstructed in a highly readable manner and came off with some smooth flow and intensity. nice ebb and flow there with your imagery right there imo. To be honest this was a High level topical read.
Frank. Bro, you came creative as usual but also came with some nonsense. I'm gonna have to give you a C- on this one and I've seen you bring it as high as the A- level. It's really just a matter of you being a highly creative individual but you never were really taught proper grammar and shit like that. I can't hold that against you but I also can't give you props when you use word constructions that don't bend but actually break the laws of poetic license.
V/ vividly vague
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