Buddha, I really like that you are in the tourney because its worthwhile watching you work
I feel like from the start of the verse you had a great idea for where you were going to take this
but towards the end of it you tried to switch up the flow and it just felt unauthentic afterwards
I feel as if you took a step back and eventually came to do the second part of this whole piece
but towards the end of that second verse you start to pick up on things again which was nice
I felt that if you kept the same scheme throughout you may have pulled off a flawless verse
either way I thought you put in some decent time into this because I just read it again and even though that transition fucks it up for me I still like it .
Pent, that opening up until road estranged was doooope
I really enjoy your use of slant rhymes it really brings out some slick flow
the approach to the topic really makes all of these ideas you have work together
your vocab really stands out as well this was one of the more enjoyable reads Ive had today aside from your opponents. nice work
v/Well this was quite an impressive battle to say the least, I always enjoy a good competitive showing
the fact that your styles clash so well makes this even better upon a third & fourth read
I thought that Buddha came with that old school funk that he always brings to the table without failure.
and then we have Pent who is a blend of intellectual & poetic prose making it much more exciting due to his recent in-activities
both had a few stumbles here & there but I feel like they both made up for it by being so swift with the pens
the slip ups seem like intentional mishaps to break up the field & it brings focus to some important areas
I really enjoyed both pieces but I feel that due to his more direct approach and fuller verse he may have edged it out
of course thats not saying his opponent didnt do the same its just that its somewhat tough to focus on which is better
the styles & the flows its just an impressive bout. but Im leaning towards GodComplex on this one...
its a great battle & feel like this can go either way....
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