Cimmerian, very brief, but direct enough to get the content. The flow and short line format you used was pretty nice and made it more like an onstage performance script like monologue. Would of liked a bit more content to develop this more
Witty, nice flow and topical approach to this. I like the inner me of vanity angle you used and it came together nicely as you wrapped it up. The graphic take with the cup of puss running over and the pristine scalpel of humanity and art. Nicely put together.
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