Argh
I intended to light a fire under you last week, and it appears to have had an adverse effect. I understand you wrote this on a plane ride over Amsterdam or whatever, but you come highly recommended and this effort is a slap in the face of Adonis who vouched for you so adamantly. Whether this was inspired by Cimmerian, or merely an unprioritized last ditch attempt, I cannot help but wonder why you were seeded so highly. To put it nicely, this was a disaster, start to finish. You had 6 days to brainstorm and lay it down. This weeks verse paled in comparison to your verse last week, which I found well thought out, bullshit aside. Somebody needs to link me to a verse B.E wrote that is worthy of being labeled 4th seed material. You title the verse power in the biggest, baddest font available and it comes off as compensation for your lackluster pen game. We'll just chalk it up to unpreparedness and lack thereof.
Mr. J
I remember you as Qwuarterz~ A insignificant fixture in the open mic forum. You were the most persistent in the sense, you dropped a piece almost religiously on the daily. I respected you for that, and I would pop in to tell you so. Recently, you have adapted quite the ego and I must have missed out on the battles, in which it stems from. I did my research and saw you made a deep run in my absence using a style all too familiar. An impressive stint, that I have called you out privately about. I am not convinced that you are deserving of such an inflated Ego, Mr J. With that said, I can humbly proceed to break down this submission. There is not much to it. It does strike me as rock bottom like in its sad state. And it ended well with the tarp imagery. All in all, a decent verse.
Not quite an Easy decision, but
MVGT MR J
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