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I commend both writers on a nice showing.

Witty
Your introspective verse considered the role that vanity and ego play in moving mankind forward. At times, your pronouns got a bit muddy (we, us, he) which caused me to pause. There were some beautifully written passages throughout, most notably the eyes and fingers section.

Cimmerian
I'll just say it: I'm a big fan. Your words speak to me, and this piece was no different. Your verse told the tale of a stockbroker who orchestrates his own demise following a market crash. I loved the set up, the attention to detail, and the bird allusion in the closer.

Vote
Both verses are worthy, for sure. The only true differentiator is personal preference. In terms of content, I prefer linear narratives that are grounded in the human experience. I also think Cimmerian's piece was more tightly constructed with a sharper focus on word choice and description.

VOTE = Cimmerian