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Frank · 01-19-2016, 11:01 PM

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Feeling this, You could potentially elevate into another tier if you focused and wrote more than 12 lines each time. You can craft and conjure imagery though. You display beautiful thoughts at times. This was rather epic for a blurb like showing. I feel you are beginning to exemplify more maturity in your writing, Inno. It is time for you to ditch the brevity and bring out the scroll. 48 liner, Test your might.

Grafx
Sentimental approach registered on my emotional gauge. Story is actually one I am all too familiar with. Having lost my mother to cancer, I can cope with you. Aside from the triggering emotion, I wasn't truly convinced by the devices. Without much rhyming or candance it read more like a run on conversation, instead of a poem,

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01-19-2016, 11:01 PM	#9
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Innovator Feeling this, You could potentially elevate into another tier if you focused and wrote more than 12 lines each time. You can craft and conjure imagery though. You display beautiful thoughts at times. This was rather epic for a blurb like showing. I feel you are beginning to exemplify more maturity in your writing, Inno. It is time for you to ditch the brevity and bring out the scroll. 48 liner, Test your might. Grafx Sentimental approach registered on my emotional gauge. Story is actually one I am all too familiar with. Having lost my mother to cancer, I can cope with you. Aside from the triggering emotion, I wasn't truly convinced by the devices. Without much rhyming or candance it read more like a run on conversation, instead of a poem, Voting Innovator for the deeper thoughts in correlation to the given topic __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 01-19-2016 at 11:03 PM.