The fact that you writing a letter to ya moms is dope can't fuck with that. rhymes and flows was good but kinda on the surface too much that they don't seem sincere. I know u might just be trying to be direct and shit. Like maybe dig deeper next time you write personal shit like this. Don't stay at the surface of it. thats ya mom and everybody feel like this about they mom. But you gotta make us care that it's "your" mom. Hope you get what i'm saying
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