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Old 01-16-2016, 03:33 PM   #9
Pinot Grij
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Cred - d'usse bottle line was alright, but I had to google it so loses points w/ me. Baywatch shit was dope af. Nike cap felt played. Neighbourhood watch was decent concept but didn't hit really hard. Closer was cool - wording made it funnier than the actual wordplay was.

Schad - opener had a cool flow and read nicely but the insinuation of the line is that you're gonna bring the same meaning to school shooter, so I didn't feel it was that hard. Totes line was cool. I didn't get the Nick Cannon line. Fan the heater line was alright. I didn't get the closer.

Vote -- Cred had a couple harder hits and less egregious misses, imo. Felt like this was not the best effort from either - both capable of better.
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