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Old 01-16-2016, 03:40 PM   #7
Pinot Grij
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Des - opener was creative, had me laughing once I sounded it out. Nicely done. "Sle vin" line had potential, but I felt it got lost in wording. Blunt line was hilarious. NEver saw Straight Outta Compton so that line missed for me. Closer was hilarious as well.

Slecht - the Rams concept coulda gone so many ways this week, I think this was a prety simplistic approach to it. Aaron Ramsey - Arsenal bars? I think that's a tough sell with this audience. I had to google it - haven't been that up to date with the premier league this season. Young/reckless and old fart lines are real big misses. And I don't know anything about the Amen battle so that one's a miss for me.

Vote -- Des. I liked the comedic angle - highly entertaining. Slecht whiffed across the board for me.
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