Okay decent battle yall good job showing at sum points this could be a hard one to choose between without sounding boring I'm sure u think this advise is whack and worthless but I have a choice and an opinion both extremely antagonizing but I'm trying to think of feed to leave both of you I quickly read each verse and at times I had to keep reminding myself with this league and the poetry league in general which is something I have to make it clear that this was the second piece I've posted in like three good weeks which really means half a year ago beginning to post in the cypher threads and once again no meaning to point out that because this was the poetry league I gave my vote to vulgar and found that because Adonis maybe read about what he though was a rather elusive ending her verse just felt weaker albeit she is running this league maybe work caught up with her don't know just found vulgar more appropriate on that level whether or not I'm right
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