[Witty]

MMLP: I liked this, I didn't know it was a chicken until the end lol and that's good to me because I use that device often, I like twists and this was a good one. You threw me off the scent pretty well but when I went back and read again some of the word choices you used to point towards the twist at the end were very skillfully and subtly placed. The flow was very good, your description of the friendship made it seem very real, as did the pain and torture of the ending, all in all a good piece which I enjoyed. Nice work man.

Pent Up - This was super slick man, smooth as silk to read, rhymes were impressive, and the subject matter, while nothing that hasn't been approached before, had your own signature touch to it. You wrote about an important issue within society, which can sometimes be difficult to do with sincerity without it becoming overly morbid or pretentious, but you pulled it off, the rhythm of the piece gave it a weird light hearted lilting feel to it which perhaps didn't blend great with the content, but nonetheless made it an effortless and enjoyable read.

I really enjoyed this battle, both wrote well and while they both approached the topic at very different angles, both succeeded in making enjoyable verses out of their concepts.


Close battle imo, but I'm going with Pent Up just for having the more polished verse. There was not much in it tbh.