anyway.
BE writes pretty prose. the setup and twist were a bit on the nose though. this type of thing has been done to death (no pun intended).
2crip writes the delusions of a ghostly subway figure telling you to get off his train.
i don't think i need to break this down. i'm kind of impressed 2crip both showed and tried to write a topical piece of some sort, tbh. it's more than bags did.
v/ BE
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