[Soulstice]

I've heard words that have never been said, stories untold
Saw the fourties unfold, put a bullet in a President's head

that was good, flow was fresh. some other references were well placed some were kind of eh

I witnessed God's grace within the Garden of Eden
Then saw him turn his back on the starving and grieving

dope as well. ending was kinda corny. wished you flipped it like "I'm anger" or something. idk if that even fits, but something else wouldve been cooler IMO

pharoah - this is kind of fitting for this site, and was conceptually cool. the flow and rhymes need to be tightened up as well as your metaphors the porn better than food was ok but iller lines have been spoken and typed. stay up

v/ witty