Frank, sometimes I feel like you are the idiot savant of whichever league you are in
with that being said, I felt like you may have written this whole piece on a whim...
which is cute but you basically told a story everyone is familiar with. I stopped halfway through
forcing myself to read the excessive lines was something that I could not do...
I will say that you squeezed a few lines in that made me chuckle for sometime
but I could not bring myself to finish, I adore your return though my little concubine
Graphx...or however you spell your name after reading your post again with my free time
I am drawn to the idea you brought to the table but compared to your opponent...you need lines
where you take the simple approach your opponent would write a novel..
regardless if its good or not. what you bring to the table may or may not be awful...
either way Im enjoying these new heads that have made their appearance known
and I welcome you, and I appreciate the style you have brought with your poem...
v/well although I dont want to give it to him....this vote has to go to Frank
Graph X nice showing but you needed a bit more to knock this old cog out the clock...
nice work fellas...thanks
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