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Witty -- point: lennon was shot on his doorstep. Counterpoint: you were crazy from the get go. Ive read verses like this where i liked the flip better (such as verses written from an actors mind or something akin to that). But as it stands the only bad thing i really have to say about this is the "ation" rhymes at the beginning were sloppy. Good shit.

Pharoh - there were glimpses of dopeness littered here. I particularly liked the stanza with the childhood obesity thing. The search engine bit there resonated like when ur drawjng a blank so u just go lookibg for skmething interesting u can vaguely twist into your topic. Then, same stanza, the reviews by ppl whove used it reminds me of that thing "the brain is the only organ to name itself." Uunique thinking. I like it. Mechanics are your downfall though.

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