Brokenhal0 - "nonsensical in sensitive ways." Is probably the most resonating statement found in your verse. It aptly describes the verse itself, which is amusing. There was this barrage of imagery at the beginning that felt like an expert rhymer had sudden onset adhd. He would look at the pic write a statement, down at the pad and write a descriptive phrase. Then up at the picture, back down at paper and jot a new descriptove phrase about a differe t portion of the picture that seemed to expertly rhyme, accidentally. Then later this was some far out thinking and all in all i think you and wise ways would collab well. With that said, interesting take.
Pinot -- your ending surprised me and i dont know how to accept that because it wasnt much of a surprise. Im perplexed. That aside, judging from this verse - i maintain we could hang out and have a few beers together. Story was hilarious and accomplished more worked in cameos then the new star wars. Solid
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Originally Posted by RichardCorey
I can't beat this Pent. I'll admit, on my best day, I couldn't beat this Pent.
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