Netcees - View Single Post - Round One: razah vs. Innovator [OPEN FOR VOTES]

Pinot Grij · 01-12-2016, 11:54 AM

Inno - you didn't really care enough to write a verse, so I don't really care enough to break down my vote.

Razah - stuck to the topic - straightforward contemplation piece. The rapid fire prose style I felt added to your paranoia/distrust angle. Liked the "lyric" line and the repetition of "I" in the final line.

Vote -- Razah

01-12-2016, 11:54 AM	#10
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Inno - you didn't really care enough to write a verse, so I don't really care enough to break down my vote. Razah - stuck to the topic - straightforward contemplation piece. The rapid fire prose style I felt added to your paranoia/distrust angle. Liked the "lyric" line and the repetition of "I" in the final line. Vote -- Razah __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.