[Adonis]

Tough vote. You each executed your concept well. Graf had the more poetical vibe to and had the better layout, but Ob had the depth I feel, though Graf was not far behind in that aspect. I enjoyed the flow of each, though rhyming is not needed here IMO, regardless, the pace you both set moved quickly and shifted seamlessly. This is based purely off preference because i do think the verses were similar in terms of mechanics and the like.

In the end though, while I enjoyed the views OB gave me of a photographer examining life and explaining how he sees it, I enjoyed the question of freedom and time just a tad more.

v/GrafX