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dead man: Cool to see that you appreciated it. I wondered wether you'd be bitter about it or appreciate the fact that I was a notorious grammar nazi on your piece, so I'm happy to see that you didn't go in defensive mode. You're probably just lazy when it comes to correction, but I know a few people that sucks when it comes to writing stuff even on facebook statuses, so the possibility is there that this might be one of your weaknesses. Seeing how you enjoy writing shit and got talent, I don't see why this couldn't be a great opportunity to improve it. If you do it and sometime decide to write stories you'll thank me for it as readers will be a lot more strict when it comes to literary works. Specially if you reach the point where you want to send it in to someone. Either way; it was a dope piece and I look forward to read more from you.
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IamBenT: Thanks. :)