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StarFaggot · 05-08-2013, 02:28 PM

Jay - lol at dont ruin the act, Derwin saber line was ok could've been reworded, everything else was a bit sub par. Your concepts were identical throughout the entire verse and the creativity didn't connect well.

Boredom - the dj line was ok but could've been reworded, the rest was an ok attempt at wit but they didn't hit.

I've got Jay winning this slightly bc I enjoyed his verse more.

05-08-2013, 02:28 PM	#8
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Jay - lol at dont ruin the act, Derwin saber line was ok could've been reworded, everything else was a bit sub par. Your concepts were identical throughout the entire verse and the creativity didn't connect well. Boredom - the dj line was ok but could've been reworded, the rest was an ok attempt at wit but they didn't hit. I've got Jay winning this slightly bc I enjoyed his verse more. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]