Great job, I love this shit...I could legit read just straight rhymes like this all day and not get bored. I like that it isn't JUST rhymes though, you go off in tangents and come up with unique little ideas and turns of phrase that I probably wouldn't have thought of myself. I like that, one of the things I like seeing is something that makes me think 'I could sit and think for days and not have thought of that particular angle' good job man. Props.
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Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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