[IamBenT]

An abode to call his own which rains upon his canvas of flames
A transient chant of change in light-rays of immaculate range
A flutter of answers flood each wavering shudder he’s made
As the trance of a phantom whispers true life throughout his veins

Just wow, right here, everything deftly placed and images expertly maneuvered.

Loved the energy and life you give to the tiger, this piece is a great example of
how to bring vivacity to the picture and still give insight and depth, you don't have to
sacrifice one for the other.

Flow is great here, ever since you went to using more internal rhymes lol I have enjoyed your verses that much more.

Also, what you are doing with colors is very creative and poetic. loved that.

May HOF worthy right here, cheers.