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Old 12-15-2015, 07:20 AM   #5
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fuck everybody above me.

this was profoundly sad imo. if one has ever lost somebody close to them and called their number just to hear their voicemail message then they may not really understand. it's a weird kind of grieving process. clinging on to the small things that make them seem alive. it's selfish and immature but for just one moment, it helps.

really, really liked this beat as well. but i also like the original song. your content was perfect for this.

yeah, your basic rapping skills aren't the best on this. your flow was rushed and a bit monotone, and i wasnt even particularly a fan of how you wrote some of your lines, but ill be damned if i didn't feel the content.

thanks.
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