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Old 05-07-2013, 06:09 PM   #6
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epic battle. this could very well be the final right here if they are in different divisions. not sure but ya what a clash of styles. Deadmans methodic, complex and supreme structuring against Franks free spirited flow that bucks traditional structure but ends up with a cadence that seems next level at times.

dead man - its been too long since you dropped a verse in this league. nobodys verses flow better for me than yours and I really relate to your structure cause I think we have somewhat similar styles. this verse was dope. the flow was sick. content wise it was otherworldy. the story kept me interested. only thing I think it was missing was some more multis. not that the lack of them detracted from the piece but I think it would have added to it if you threw some in there.

Frank- well francis this was a cool story that got better as it progressed. I really enjoyed the section where the girl went to the other side which really brought it all together with the picture. the flow was good, in some parts great, in some just ok. this was your usual style, which is good, but minus the tongue in cheek humor. and I think the serious side of frank was cool.

real tough to decide. like I said epic battle. two dope verses but one outshined the other by a slim margin imo and that was

vote - dead
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