[Adonis]

V/ Jective

I enjoyed the slow pace and imagery OB painted. You didn't go full on action which would have been obvious. Instead you posted something more, well not introspective but less action and more by standard scenery. Hope you stick around this time. Inno on the other hand, for starters, while I enjoyed the verse, I did not enjoy the the break in first and second line. In the end, length did you in obviously