Alot of the stuff you spittin is very relatable for the most part. I like the fact that you were very specific on the details and the scenery. Brings you in for real
Could've flipped cleaner multi-syllables but thats just my personal bias.
for example "sheltered as fuck, stuck in my shell, wanted something to feel/.... 'round the time Em stuck nine inch nails" could've flowed better like
"sheltered as fuck, I was stuck... in my shell, wanted something... I could feel/.... 'round the time Em stuck nine inch nails/
I was stealing porn mags out of Barnes n nobles/ you was singing I love you over Barneys vocals
Tight line but seemed like a battle diss. kinda out of place for a sentimental kinda vibe i was feeling. But the line was playful and kept it fun too. So mixed feelings
over all man I give it a 6.5/10
I love the idea and the introspection but the flow needs a lil work.
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