i could be wrong, but i get the feeling that this style is somewhat different than what you both usually do.
pretty cool.
my fav part from each stanza (caught my eye/ear):
you shouldn't lie your sick
you couldn't rhyme
as if,
in all honesty if I was you I would rather die than live
I spit the vilest shit,
&
this is a trajectory collision, vehicular slaughter.
I'll turn your goofy clique into murder mystery solvers.
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