This had a real old skool "AIM Cypher" freestyles keystyled up in the reply box feel to it that I liked!
I also enjoyed the whole kinda "broken-down bar" flow to it, not sure if everyone will catch it while reading it in text but the two of you place more emphasis on flow than a lot of text heads do, and I for one dig that.
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fuck a surgical face lift
I'll completely pulverise yours and leave you permanently faceless
there's no turnin' the tables on me
I run circles 'round squares
you just wish we were reversed in our places
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Loved the permanently faceless line in particular from Exis. Dope.
Vividlyvague went offffffffff with that whole interstellar scheme, I thought that was ill!
I'd have probably used "If it's any
constellation" instead of consolation as a malopropism, but I saw you used constellation anyway a little later on. No real reason for it, it just would have amused myself in the middle of the scheme to do that. Lol.
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Think you can fare a wave like you hailing cabs?
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That one stood out too.
Overall you two meshed real nicely, similar styles and whatnot in execution. Very enjoyable read and somewhat of a nostalgic feel to it from my early first days of text.
Keep those pens moving!