Sill occasionally hit em with the notre dom style but it's more refined now like the hunchback drinking a nice aged wine rocking a suit. The transition is okay but I feel you need to develop more of that rugged rhyme scheme where it's not so refined because thats where you can set yourself apart. It's like Bam Bam hitting you over the head with a club! You know what I'm saying? It's real dinosaur cave man - me want jane shit.
lmao ok I will definitely do that francis thanks for the advice
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